Feedback for final film!

From our feedback we can see that as a group we were slightly harsh on our marking, we can see this from the feedback sheets our peers have given us. We gave our film a level 3 however our peers gave us a level 4.  It is clear that some of our shots and framing were a bit shaky but overall the feedback was good.

AS Media Coursework Final Film

Here is our final media film: The Lullaby

Amended second shoot

This is our second shoot. Based on the comments we received last time, we've made some changes in our story board and added various camera shots like shot reverse shot. We have also decided to not darken the scenes in the park to make it look like night as we think that the emptiness of the park during the daytime is much more eerie.

We have had to change actress due to our previous one not being able to make any of our shoots. But we have managed to find one that also has blonde hair and will be able to fit the part.

First shoot

Our final Red balloon Productions logo

This is our chosen logo for our film. We have used the idea of the clouds from the Dreamworks logo but made sure that they were very dark so we can relate it more to a horror film. 

Red balloon productions logo

First of all we tried using red fro the string but i felt that it was too much red and didn't look realistic enough.

We found that using white for the string made it look as if it were a real balloon and just made the logo look better in general

Date of Second Filming/ Shotlist and storyboard change

We will be doing our second media filming on 16th March (Friday) for the park scene and bedroom scene.

Here are the amended storyboard and shot list sheets, we have changed it to add some shot reverse shot and some different angles.