We decided to make our script more like the 'A nightmare on elm street' script as there is very little dialogue in our film and the setting is more important than the speech.
First scene
Simon’s Bedroom – Night
Simon Ring climbs into bed, wearing pale blue pyjamas. He’s 16. He lies in bed, he closes his eyes and falls asleep.
Second scene
Playground – Night
Simon wakes up, gets up rubbing his eyes. When he is stood up he looks around the park. All is still and quiet.
Suddenly the swing begins to move and other play ground equipment but nothing appears to be moving them.
CLOSE UP of Simon’s feet (bare foot) to see the fog form (fog added with effects).
The girl ghost is watching Simon from afar and is breathing heavily but we still haven’t seen the girls face. We see Simon stumbling around, glancing in different directions.
Simon – ‘Hello?’
Girl ghost – ‘Here comes the candle to light you to bed’ (Slow, eerie, creepy child-like voice)
Girl then disappears – Simon gasps
Girl reappears in a different place in the park – Simon glances around and sees that she is someone else.
Simon – ‘Who are you?’ (Steps towards the ghost)
GG- And here comes the chopper to chop off your head’
The she disappears again just as he gets near her and then when she says ‘Chop’ she reappears ‘Chop’ disappears and then when she says chop for the final time. She is stood behind Simon.
Girl Ghost growls
(END OF OPENING.)
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