Marking previous students' work (Isabel Wong)

AS MEDIA HORROR 2010 - 2011 ALONE 38(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57hnNbqO5nw&list=PL72143FB46C11715F&index=11&feature=plpp_video)
The strengths of the video are the costumes and make up they used are quite appropriate,
as the blue cardigan and white top the girl is wearing and the blood spots on her body create a
explicit contrast between innocence and sinister, such contrast makes the audience thrilled.
The background music they used also matches the flow of the video.
But they can work a bit more carefully on framing, because sometime the rooms they left for the
video aren't necessary, those rooms they left might make me to expect something is about to happen/
show up from that corner but it turns out nothing which makes me a bit disappointed.
At the last scene, there is an extreme close up of the girl, it would be better if they
put in a scary or chilling music to make the audience jump and make the film incredible.

AS MEDIA HORROR 2010 - 2011 VIDEO EVIDENCE 37
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_N0lc7K33ac&feature=autoplay&list=PL72143FB46C11715F&lf=plpp_video&playnext=1)
They are excellent on making use of the special effect, and the background music naturally
leads the audience into the mood and makes them follow the flow of the story.
However, the problem of their video is they left too much head room in the scene where the three
characters are watching TV on sofa. The tallest male actor even suddenly goes insane in that scene,
it would be better if they add a close up to focus on his facial expression.
Nearly at the end of the film, they left too much space for the scene again which gives no clue
to the audience of what their focus is, I even have no idea of what is going on at the end of the film.